Wednesday, August 11, 2010

Prompt #10: Eyes

Eyes are truth.
This simple lie, so weak and tired, cannot be so.
They guide in our quest to map the world,
but fall short of pure reality.

But perhaps reality can only exist
in the small arena
of which the eyes pay witness.

5 comments:

  1. Very good poem.

    'Eyes are truth.
    This simple lie, so weak and tired, cannot be so.'

    Excellent lines.

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